Love’s not bright and constant
but only cheese on toast;
a little glance,
returning nod,
a cup of tea, a smile, a nudge
and sometimes, like a closing door,
it needs a push before it turns and groans
and opens to the garden.
Another thing:
the gaps
between the cheese, the tea, the toast and sunny laughter
- they also matter -
because it’s there, right there, that you remember to remember.
And do, indeed, remember.
simply beautiful.... :)
ReplyDeleteSo touching... few words, really meaningful!
ReplyDeleteLovely. A little smile.
ReplyDeleteWow, I really loved this!
ReplyDeleteYes, yes...the cracks, the spaces, the gaps. All of the tiny things, absolutely. Thank you, I'm seeing it in a different light & it's right. Almost forgot. I remember now
ReplyDeleteall those things
ReplyDeletethose seemingly normal
little things
Thank you, nAncY.
ReplyDeleteI am covered by the shadow of His wings.
so lovely....thank you!
ReplyDeletewow---just what i needed to read. :)
ReplyDeletedigging this. thanks
ReplyDeleteMy BH is such a cheese on toast type, so this resonates.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteHats off
ReplyDeleteJust wonderful. Enjoyed this one.
ReplyDeleteAw ~ yes remembering is part of the healing ~ why did I love u ~ how did we share our love ~ what kinds of care/love & how we took care of each other throughout each ordinary & incredible day! Thank I for your poem especially on Valentine Day!
ReplyDeleteawesome!...
ReplyDeleteThis poem exemplifies the best bits of what love truly is.
ReplyDeleteI really really love this poem...it's therapeutic.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteAww, so true and beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteSimple yet beautiful.
ReplyDeleteSimply written, beautifully expressed!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteVery good.
ReplyDeleteI love cheese on toast & this poem.
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