We ate a little dinner on Sunday evening
as family sitting around a dining table
(Van Morrison played a background beat)
and discussed how exciting the disco had been
so Andrew would clock it and tell to
Natasha, his teacher, next day of the dance
when he suddenly clapped out a huge ovation
for our cook, author of a sausage repast,
and we all joined in as never before:
never before so excited about being
together and noisily together thanking creation.
I love the snapshot quality of this. Very appealing, honest tone. Great work.
ReplyDeleteSlice of life and joyful thankfulness at its best. You've painted us a beautiful picture. ;o)
ReplyDeleteA perfect snapshot
ReplyDeletePerfect ode to that all-important tradition of the family meal. You sound a very joyous note :)
ReplyDeleteBeauty and joy is best in the simplest of things. Mealtimes will never be the same. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteA lovely mind photo of a joyous family meal.
ReplyDeleteWords put into perspective to resonate our daily lives,poetry in motion is poetr y in action,we live words in this world, poetry is good with good poet! Nice!
ReplyDeleteVery lovely. I could picture the family joyous and smiling.
ReplyDeleteAnne
Nice. Really enjoyed the family dinner feeling.
ReplyDelete"Noisily together," I like those words.
ReplyDeleteMorrison mealtime memories - such lovely images in your warm poetry kudos to you.
ReplyDeleteSavour the moment...flavour and life....that's how that poem made me feel.
ReplyDeletelovely...
ReplyDeleteLike the rhythm noisy celebration ending in gratitude.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, wonderfully written!
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