tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post295621406493851277..comments2023-10-21T18:20:40.064+01:00Comments on Real Poems: In a word,John Lavanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07782664924169570072noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-52189446949398112922011-08-08T07:12:22.463+01:002011-08-08T07:12:22.463+01:00i like short poems
too many word wear me down
slow...i like short poems<br />too many word wear me down<br />slowly my eyes closeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-22088068710998192682011-08-07T19:34:57.869+01:002011-08-07T19:34:57.869+01:00Sweet, not you the lines. j.Sweet, not you the lines. j.pantechniconpoet@wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05101686410013251087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-26053317734471315662011-08-07T17:30:02.028+01:002011-08-07T17:30:02.028+01:00nice!nice!Nikoleta Kyprianidishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07164211684570172241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-55565839225419390792011-08-07T13:20:06.576+01:002011-08-07T13:20:06.576+01:00I love haiku. very tough sometimes to get the righ...I love haiku. very tough sometimes to get the right balance. I like this one. It delivers the emotion and so much moreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com