tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post4155718885114451874..comments2023-10-21T18:20:40.064+01:00Comments on Real Poems: Can't sleepJohn Lavanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07782664924169570072noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-43966142110694526752014-06-14T09:24:32.567+01:002014-06-14T09:24:32.567+01:00This was very effective, specifically, getting the...This was very effective, specifically, getting the reader to bypass sight in order to sense something divine.Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09999874043900192348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-26656994467532436492013-08-15T12:32:56.375+01:002013-08-15T12:32:56.375+01:00Beautiful as ever. It made me smile and feel refle...Beautiful as ever. It made me smile and feel reflective all at once.Natashahttp://www.chickenandfrog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-1646941606479584662013-05-30T23:04:06.256+01:002013-05-30T23:04:06.256+01:00This is so wonderful, I love the details of the se...This is so wonderful, I love the details of the settings and the structure of the poem. Very nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-54426258759750256912011-05-02T21:02:32.162+01:002011-05-02T21:02:32.162+01:00This is beautiful and very meaningful as for me wh...This is beautiful and very meaningful as for me when I can't sleep it is very much the 'disconnected head and heart'. Thank you for writing it.Aandi Greenwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00133444619499698553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-6741913581178536352009-06-18T06:12:48.201+01:002009-06-18T06:12:48.201+01:00Thanks Marcus - it helps that you followed the flo...Thanks Marcus - it helps that you followed the flow of the poem and stayed with its turns!John Lavanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07782664924169570072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-1941278319333459882009-06-17T12:07:23.529+01:002009-06-17T12:07:23.529+01:00I loved this line: "heat turns up a winter wi...I loved this line: "heat turns up a winter wick"<br /><br />But I also enjoyed the turn to coffee and Andrew and the implication about why you can't sleep.Marcus Goodyearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07255781957722144278noreply@blogger.com