tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post4923812838925160595..comments2023-10-21T18:20:40.064+01:00Comments on Real Poems: ...but blackberriesJohn Lavanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07782664924169570072noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-91376701135013276082014-05-10T10:49:06.592+01:002014-05-10T10:49:06.592+01:00Oh how it captures long lost youthful memories, co...Oh how it captures long lost youthful memories, conceived in wonderment during my lovelorn time spent in communion with my fair and ever changing gracious lady nature, many, many years ago. Thank you. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04113308004378354370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-88252105481102141452011-05-21T02:01:55.853+01:002011-05-21T02:01:55.853+01:00"they shine in Autumn as their time"...m..."they shine in Autumn as their time"...my fave line. You can almost guess that they will taste of warm days, cold nights, endings and beginnings.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-40087358902116870972010-10-09T21:45:18.675+01:002010-10-09T21:45:18.675+01:00Wonderful...I was in total amusement as I read thi...Wonderful...I was in total amusement as I read this...outstanding...each stanza questioned my writing skills...nicely done...and I like how it end, "...but blackberries"<br /><br />respect...Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-87796929393128542982010-02-26T01:13:13.069+00:002010-02-26T01:13:13.069+00:00I am a vision teacher. Your sound like you are on...I am a vision teacher. Your sound like you are on an amuzement park ride, with the optic nerves dancing. We do not have blackberries in our backyard. Sound's a little like a story of a fig tree.Deborah Farnsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05561765386814365042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-21783202431226449192010-01-22T19:45:54.328+00:002010-01-22T19:45:54.328+00:00Sweet temptation. I really like the "yes, no...Sweet temptation. I really like the "yes, no, maybe" of this.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-90759440300104405942009-11-12T21:03:12.322+00:002009-11-12T21:03:12.322+00:00Lovely. I was there with you every moment.Lovely. I was there with you every moment.Beth Hoffmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16770840174293503835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-42772904078609673052009-10-15T00:54:13.599+01:002009-10-15T00:54:13.599+01:00This is the first one I've read - I like! Remi...This is the first one I've read - I like! Reminds me of haiku.Jessica Rydillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08941823791297386497noreply@blogger.com