tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post7280636673172562894..comments2023-10-21T18:20:40.064+01:00Comments on Real Poems: BoyJohn Lavanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07782664924169570072noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-52759862056296641992014-06-02T17:32:45.983+01:002014-06-02T17:32:45.983+01:00The makings of a happy, healthy child.
What every...The makings of a happy, healthy child. <br />What every child long for. <br />Beautiful poem. I hope it is the reality of every child.Peacepoxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00976342618540527122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-11765038929906038622014-05-12T05:22:02.943+01:002014-05-12T05:22:02.943+01:00Lots of great comments for a Great Poem.Lots of great comments for a Great Poem.Geraldine Bankshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15189674753774486463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-22811169355495184562014-03-23T01:49:43.814+00:002014-03-23T01:49:43.814+00:00Interesante y hermosa su poesía. Me gustado mucho ...Interesante y hermosa su poesía. Me gustado mucho su lírica.Clarisa T. https://www.blogger.com/profile/00728402596825854149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-83494437906319383132013-10-02T00:37:59.814+01:002013-10-02T00:37:59.814+01:00I liked it quite a bit. I like the word pictures w...I liked it quite a bit. I like the word pictures with which you painted it. JoeJoseph Lewishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13561321078034024046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-57254343063095158552013-10-01T22:38:54.871+01:002013-10-01T22:38:54.871+01:00I enjoyed this.I enjoyed this.Ken Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01985784283310135672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-509901281250132272013-10-01T22:29:38.760+01:002013-10-01T22:29:38.760+01:00That's very playful I liked it and makes that ...That's very playful I liked it and makes that one want to wear a chef hat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-56390176205113693882013-08-16T12:41:55.807+01:002013-08-16T12:41:55.807+01:00...fine minds have goggled it, and it's seen l......fine minds have goggled it, and it's seen like the sprinkles of a lumps of prism before sunlight! <br /><br />Author of, "The Last Carver"Ositadimma Amakezehttp://www.sbpra.com/OsitadimmaAmakezenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-51000261900803316732012-12-29T09:28:17.143+00:002012-12-29T09:28:17.143+00:00An achingly beautiful cry to be seen, heard, appre...An achingly beautiful cry to be seen, heard, appreciated and loved. No doubt written from your son's perspective. Also appeals to the boy (or girl) within that is alive to possibilities in interaction with others. There is so much richness here to be explored. I agree that it would make a great set text for schools. Simply lovely on the surface yet yielding more gems as its depths are mined.Joy Lentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03486637586238798088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-8954849090470985852012-11-27T08:17:41.971+00:002012-11-27T08:17:41.971+00:00This is one of the beautiful poems. It circles all...This is one of the beautiful poems. It circles all the needs and wants in life.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06260084865969521262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-34317755329440445082012-10-17T00:35:15.344+01:002012-10-17T00:35:15.344+01:00You are a father. It's plain to see. The yesne...You are a father. It's plain to see. The yesness, of course.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-76020806539216265662012-09-27T08:42:57.111+01:002012-09-27T08:42:57.111+01:00Great work!Great work!Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05100812038496671783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-72408960836361461462012-08-12T05:36:03.081+01:002012-08-12T05:36:03.081+01:00So beautiful and moving! At first I thought it was...So beautiful and moving! At first I thought it was about your son but then I realized it can apply to every human being. Thanks for sharing :)heljustmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859373220780740184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-31961945866579118892012-07-15T08:42:02.457+01:002012-07-15T08:42:02.457+01:00@Jack9eight5 was here & read your poem.@Jack9eight5 was here & read your poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-59239857579430050742012-06-03T22:46:50.373+01:002012-06-03T22:46:50.373+01:00yes, let schools teach it to all, kids and adults ...yes, let schools teach it to all, kids and adults alike resuscitate love where money killed it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17473208853999058746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-8900300277294065872012-05-10T17:21:15.854+01:002012-05-10T17:21:15.854+01:00You are one of my favourite living poets! I try no...You are one of my favourite living poets! I try not to read too much so as not to influence my own work ....but yours is too tempting John!<br />Off to get your book, darn it this poetry habit can get expensive for a starving poet ;) <br /><br />Heather<br />heathergracestewart.me<br />heathergracestewart.comHeather Grace Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14587515755496873595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-31007483732830486262012-02-02T08:21:21.101+00:002012-02-02T08:21:21.101+00:00Yes! If you are a loving father, you should read t...Yes! If you are a loving father, you should read this. I choked up a lil'.B-Fry420https://www.blogger.com/profile/05933892878452073702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-5035021063912363462011-09-02T09:39:08.582+01:002011-09-02T09:39:08.582+01:00Such a vivid outcry! I particularly like the way y...Such a vivid outcry! I particularly like the way you have structured it - each stanza springing from a different appeal ;-)<br />Thanks for a wonderful poem!Mariya Kolevahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13538316529329857460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-27754856407621564642011-06-07T05:34:04.388+01:002011-06-07T05:34:04.388+01:00365 Attempts (At Life) says it for me.
Regards j...365 Attempts (At Life) says it for me.<br /><br />Regards j.pantechniconpoet@wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05101686410013251087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-73152707843404520362011-05-23T07:20:56.504+01:002011-05-23T07:20:56.504+01:00love this!love this!365 Attempts (At Life)https://www.blogger.com/profile/07180866827871627188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-51099315278665811422011-03-03T13:38:19.300+00:002011-03-03T13:38:19.300+00:00Beautiful - so much rhythm and life in it!Beautiful - so much rhythm and life in it!Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-35929613103998082372011-01-22T23:35:27.661+00:002011-01-22T23:35:27.661+00:00I love this poem! Thank you for sharing it! They s...I love this poem! Thank you for sharing it! They should add this to the curriculum for teacher training!Cathy Cawoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10262028177959773288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-89500685497632581712010-06-21T05:52:19.561+01:002010-06-21T05:52:19.561+01:00i am tickled & tickle you bak playful words of...i am tickled & tickle you bak playful words of someone just asking to bee seen heard spoken to listen to ....... ticked :*) beez thankq4sharing as always ur words delight z beez buzzzzzzzzzzz*beezknezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07053684740701017772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-35104577792415475382010-04-15T19:01:13.428+01:002010-04-15T19:01:13.428+01:00Really enjoyed BoyReally enjoyed BoyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00886839830267756567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-49568486559288959412009-12-26T05:03:13.479+00:002009-12-26T05:03:13.479+00:00Wonderful. This poem really captures the joy of &q...Wonderful. This poem really captures the joy of "boyness." I really enjoy your work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-530095866121108904.post-12545480938588530932009-11-08T21:23:25.057+00:002009-11-08T21:23:25.057+00:00Good rx for today. Loved this. Mushy heart. Leaki...Good rx for today. Loved this. Mushy heart. Leaking eyes.Kathleen Overbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12684519598333961438noreply@blogger.com