A raindrop, unaccountably round,
plunges into Mallerstang;
Eden valley, Victorian dark,
the last great wilderness in England.
People come here briefly;
a monarch, a highwayman,
a thief, an earl, a tramp to see
rivers rise – the Ouse and Eden -
and if this raindrop falls an atom’s width
to the East, it runs to York;
a molecule West, Carlisle.
On and on, the future forks
and this drop will not travel both.
Race into a great valley;
ginger gorse: an undomesticated,
wild, wet second world, happy
when earth and wind decide
what’s right and left, that it’s worth
a surging newborn driving to
a source, a smash, a violent birth.
I love this! And great title. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteDear Sir,
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing. Easy to follow and feel.
Thanks for sharing your talent
Byron Lehman (sometimes hack poet)
www.lehmancafe.com
wonderful metaphysical elements twined with a map of newness. I am enjoying your poetry.
ReplyDeleteNice... I quite love this one. Beautiful and right on time. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favorites. I like following the raindrop. Saw photos of the place, looks beautiful. Took the train through or close by once, but am sure it would have been dark when we passed through this area. If I was there, it was definitely briefly.
ReplyDeleteJohn, of course I would love this one - it's beautiful on so many levels.
ReplyDeleteLove the words.Really got into this one.Thanks j.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful metaphysical poem - love the imagery
ReplyDeleteWonderfully done. It does have a hint of Milton inspiration.
ReplyDeleteHow lovely ... layered like philo dough: images, conceptions, metaphysics ... just lovely. Thank you for writing and posting, John.
ReplyDeleteJamie Dedes
Beautiful. The line that reached out and grabbed me the most was "and this drop will not travel both" I had to stop and give space to all the thoughts that rushed into my head
ReplyDeleteWandered over from Twitter.
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery!
I love the last stanza John fantastic work and thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteAnother classic! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteWonderful. Very evocative. Precise, almost surgical writing, but by no means devoid of emotional appeal. Intriguing.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this poem. Perhaps you would consider submitting to Lunch at Giverny (lunchatgiverny.com). Coming from an Oriental background myself, I appreciate the nature images. Sometimes people fail to see, or make, the philosophical connections. you do it, it seems, instinctively.
ReplyDeleteI'm a man who is rarely interested poetry, so I felt compelled to tell you that I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteLovely- fantacy n imagination meet within such a real n simplicity - softly touching.
ReplyDeleteCantik-gambaran dan khayalan bertemu dalam satu sentuhan yang nyata- lembut- bersahaja.
A poet's fancy always gives new insights. So does this beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteI can feel the poem. Thank you.
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