In a corner of our garden
we built up a massive snowman,
stood back and marveled at our work:
the darkling eyes and ivory cheeks
and ears made out of orange skin,
a moon shaped mouth from crinoline,
an apple that we chopped in half
became a nose onto his face
(we chomped the other piece with zest),
stood back and clocked the snowman’s gaze.
We looked at him, he looked at us
or else that seemed the way it was
but then a wind harassed and dark
engulfed the scene, enforced a wrap.
Inside, hot chocolate warmed our hands
but rain started pattering hard;
telling tall tales from arctic times
on windows, walls; battering rams
attacked a house, attacked our home.
Next day, we ventured to sense him;
of how he’d changed, withstood a life.
We hoped for fire, a wink, a spark
but slowly he had, through the dark,
stripped of himself; become his block of ice.
haunting -- love the dark imagery juxtaposed with the pure whiteness of the snow(man), (whom) I've always found a little eerie, like scarecrows.
ReplyDeleteFunny poem of the snowman, and a real cold and icy man he is! But there is warmth in the house and warmth to be together with each other and tell stories! How nice a wintermeetings can be!
ReplyDeleteAnother great poem!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery. Very easy to see and feel both the emotions as well as the scenes. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteNature always tricks us..Wonderful piece. j.
ReplyDeleteLoved it. Most unusual and therefore refreshing.
ReplyDeleteNice! beautiful description of what happened
ReplyDeleteI truly loved it. Reminds me of Longfellow
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