I lurk on the left at a bar vibrating
(the beat-box is loud alright):
my drink is drained, throat like a campfire
with a barmaid busy on the right
but, in between, an invisible force-field
is clamped in a column to the bar
unseen, unstable because, as she approaches,
the waitress fades away.
I burn and blether inside a bubble
when she lurches back to the light:
I swear she desires to slop me a glassful
but the obstacle won’t let her loose.
The band is booming, the funk is fierce,
I sizzle in personal space
unbeknown because of a barrier
of tension that pushes her back.
I shake and shout and waggle my wallet
but the barmaid won’t force through the fence
when up bowls a boy with a smile like a sunset
and smashes resistance, busts up the ban
on the Smashed.
This reads like a delightful tongue-twister. I thoroughly enjoyed the imagery.
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wonderful as always, I find that I am always shocked at the amount of wisdom and inspiration your son can bestow within you, you are truely lucky..
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This is a great ol' piece. Makes me miss England. Going to gave to blitz through your massive collection here.
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Great imagery John.. I could see it all in the blink of an eye! I am a Dj's wife and have spent many nights behind the turn tables observing what goes on around me :) Thanks 4 sharing!
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