a tractor turns and its mechanical racket,
indescribable vibration,
up itself, makes no sense
while my three sons, asleep in a nearby tent,
celebrate
learning, feeling, singing, whispering, dancing.
Most clatter is hollow; spiraling labyrinthine ears
and once I sat in an empty cave and heard – Nothing.
Instinctively, I made up noises to cheer
my brain – sounds of people –
like these boys breathing and dreaming in a tent’s stocking;
yearning for the centre of a small warm circle.
Love this. Beautiful hidden rhythms as well.
ReplyDeleteLove your poem.
ReplyDeleteDeborah
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteGreat lines especially..I made up noises to cheer my brain...
ReplyDeleteRegards j..Never to early to read good verse.
memories of a child in the tent ... I got tears man!
ReplyDeleteSo nice!
ReplyDeleteCamping, I sense, has meaning intense,
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm sure you enjoy the experience.
But truth to tell, you cannot convince
Me now nor never that sleeping in tents
With bugs and mites won't make me wince
And utter oaths I truly do not need to mince.
And while you may enjoy yourself with rustic events
I'll stay in hotels with turn down service and nightly mints.
--Dan Speers, CitizenPoet.com
Very nice. We're of the same mind on camping.
DeleteStirls lovely memories of camping - when the weather is nice.
ReplyDeleteWonderful images of the camping experience. Beautiful poem my talented friend.
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