Thursday, 16 February 2012

Brother

I looked into my brother’s eye
and saw a tree there waving.
I passed beyond a garden gate
and heard a mountain calling.
I walked a long a stony path
and tasted waves a–spraying.
I looked into my brother’s eye
and felt a fire – burning.

Deep beyond the black, black sky,
I looked into my brother’s eyes
and saw myself there waving.
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27 comments:

  1. Dorianna Ric (paintswithwords)16 February 2012 at 08:37

    very nice...

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  2. Dana Lomas16 February 2012 at 16:08

    Love your words JL ... as a part-time poet, I deeply appreciate their magic. Love to Andrew as well :]]

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  3. Misty Dietz24 February 2012 at 04:36

    Gorgeous! I plan to share on Facebook and twitter! :) keep them coming, John!

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  4. alireza27 February 2012 at 19:58

    verry effectve
    alireza jamshidi - www.photoshen.com

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  5. FlowerStar29 February 2012 at 03:31

    Beautiful ~ I love this ~ Much Love & Respects ~

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  6. Richard Hayward II29 February 2012 at 03:55

    Very nice.

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  7. Alyssa10 March 2012 at 17:46

    Stirred the emotions and made me smile.

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  8. Unknown10 March 2012 at 20:59

    Very gentle, tender even, with a definite wistfulness balanced by a coonfident warmth. Excellent!

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  9. nomadwayoflife10 March 2012 at 23:27

    Cool poem.

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  10. Unknown31 May 2012 at 22:00

    Reminds me of E.A. Poe. It' Powerful. I like it!

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  11. Anonymous6 June 2012 at 20:31

    Love the viewpoint. Love the connection, Love the use of visual as a kind of memory. Thank you.

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  12. heljustme16 September 2012 at 07:44

    Eyes locking is the best form of connection and understanding :))

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  13. IsleShire19 January 2013 at 19:53

    Cool

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  14. bob zimway20 January 2013 at 03:16

    a true gift

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  15. King William IV7 February 2013 at 12:33

    This is righteous

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  16. Anonymous13 April 2013 at 16:45

    Nice poetry John! We are all brothers n sisters :)
    gardenlilie.com

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  17. Liz14 June 2013 at 03:26

    Loved it

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  18. Sarah29 August 2013 at 09:51

    Beautiful poem, how the mind enables us to travel i
    nfinitely and connect intimately.

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  19. dawordplaymind13 November 2013 at 07:40

    nice one

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  20. Unknown15 December 2013 at 23:18

    Quite deep. Well done.

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  21. Lynn22 February 2014 at 22:47

    What a beautiful poem! Thank you so much for sharing with us!

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  22. Geraldine Banks23 February 2014 at 00:52

    Excellent.

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  23. Jeremy23 February 2014 at 03:16

    Great poem.

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  24. Linda Rogers19 March 2014 at 17:57

    Beautifully written with a touch of dark. Just loved this poem.

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  25. Unknown21 August 2014 at 17:29

    What we perceive to see is reflected back on us...

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