later pater? parcels now are
sweeter (beater) better now
than happy ever after:
softer, laughter longer,
more, not sore and soothing.
Louder, proud and precious;
fuller – dull – disaster:
error, mother, moths fly
to light and flitter frisky,
out of winter’s weather
onto moon of me, now.
Love the imagery here, the whimsy of youth. Well captured!
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