After dinner, Andrew sits on the floor and belts
out notes – off key - from well known power ballads
tilting me back to early family parties
and recent business meetings when I could
and did express my tension, truth or beauty, disregarding.
Then his clamorous song stirs up a heavy
chest, my cave of mouth to a vinegar taste
and tears all dammed with clubby fingers
clenched for every time I couldn’t, didn’t
howl because he's singing out, because he can.
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ReplyDeleteHmmm, excellent. I thought, at 1st, how sweet, how beautiful and then the vinegar taste line struck me. Damn it, you go, man! Sweeter now for that splash of vinegar. Yes. Keep going.
ReplyDeletei have known a thousand andrews and each one if as off key as the other. thanks for the memories! good read.
ReplyDeletei have known a thousand andrews and each one IS as off key as the other. thanks for the memories! good read.
ReplyDeleteThat poem makes me wish I understood more.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.
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