He sits at a table opposing her,
angled, on a late night train;
chatting about his music scene
and a dream of becoming a star.
She sits opposing, strokes her hair,
leaning, on the long diagonal,
for a new tune on his headphones
and a dream of becoming a star.
Higher, higher stars alight,
spun and pulled by unseen force;
circling nodes,
flinging their mass,
radiating heat,
fusing; before they explode.
Hi John,
ReplyDeleteWhat does the long diagonal refer to?
Graham (Malik)
Hi Malik - the boy and girl were sitting diagonally across a table. Not too close and she kept it like that - just kept leaning towards him.I guess the diagonal will shorten! I'll take a look at that obscurity & change it.
ReplyDeleteBTW your Dad's poems went down a storm!! J