Thursday, 11 June 2009

A Passion

Don’t suggest a scarlet sunset

at the end of a day dropping

reaches out in heat or fiery hands

suddener than all my love for you.


  1. Strong, a soft explosion of feeling

  2. thank you its lovely, please check out some of my stuff it too is about the realities of life !

  3. Hi. I just found your bog on Twitter. I love your poetry, it's very stinted... kind of like thoughts when they're still in your head, before they hit your mouth. They're never in full sentences, you know? At any rate, whenever I find good poetry I like to ask the poets to email my boyfriend, who runs an online poetry review. They are always looking for little lines of beauty like yours. I swear I'm not a spammer :) Email me if you're interested, or would like to chat. Again, wonderful poems.