A childlike life will get you all the fun;
when to rest and when to jump and play;
what’s in a wrestle, settle, dance or run,
what makes a small adventure every day.
Of how he talked, ate, mullocked, slept at night,
worn out, stayed superconscious in the eyes,
no dusty schoolbooks, more a dancing light;
his pain was shadow for the rest of us
but now’s a time when children leave, vamoose,
a moment when we say goodbye, ta-ra,
and when we stare towards the vanishing point
all hearts are aching, every head is faint.
He glances round and says ‘merci’, ‘au revoir’
and quickly turns his back, you’re no more use.
"Walking Away" covers an important ritual in our society, the advance into adulthood.
ReplyDeleteI like how you allude to the times the narrator had, from the perspective of the parent. The lines:
"what's in a wrestle, settle, dance or run,
what makes a small adventure everyday."
make that especially clear. Having never been a parent (yet), I can only imagine the memories the lines evoke.
The last lines are the feeling of the moment, but certainly need not be true upon reflection. Parents are important always.
Thanks for the poem.
I love this one.
ReplyDeleteInnocence lost, is lost forever ...
ReplyDeletevery vivid picure. I like
ReplyDeleteAs a parent of a 17, 13, and 10 year old - this hits close to home. Thanks for expressing it well.
ReplyDeleteThanks, it touches beautifully.
ReplyDeleteLiked this!!!! Came across it via a Twitter post. Glad I found you, and please consider me a new follower. Fellow poet here.
ReplyDeleteA fine work.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and sad.
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