Tuesday, 19 May 2009

Bear Market


I ask my son directly,

which bear best;

baby, mummy, daddy?’

He answers straight out

Daddy bear is best.

                        No worries,

he gets more porridge!’

 

6 comments:

  1. Such a simple, straight-to-the-point poem - but such a profound message :-) Thanks as ever for sharing this, John.

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  2. I love the simplicity of this. And I always approve of happy endings. :o)

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  3. Nice. I love the way the words are arranged as well.

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  4. I take time out to sit and read your poetry as each week passes, and am always so impressed and inspired by your works , thankyou as always for sharing beez in Aus:)

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  5. Hey hold on a mo' my like button is getting worn away.Lovely piece I like it.

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