ice, hard as stone
- standing – in the North –
bring it South, to home,
the hearth, the heart, the home.
Sons radiate upstairs
- I sit in new light
reading Emily Dickinson –
voices vibrate, doors
slam, open and re-slam.
The house cracks and a clock
ticks second by second.
Ice, hard as stone
- standing – in the North –
bring it South, to home,
the hearth, the heart, the home
and I feel a moment
(relax)
before slow steps
onto stairs;
an engagement
for needs,
hugs
Ice, hard as stone
- standing – in the North –
bring it South, to home,
the hearth, the heart, the home.
John,
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful.
A.J.
Great poem John, really loving your work. Look forward to much more :-)
ReplyDeleteit is lovely
ReplyDeleteThere's a kind of incantatory enchantment in this one. The repetitive hypnotic effect is soothing, healing. The hearth, the heart, the home...I love the way this circles around. I love "the Sons radiate upstairs - I sit in new light." Excellent. Keep Going!
ReplyDeleteReally a lovely poem. I love the repetition throughout, it gives an air of comfort. Sets the tone.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThis is one of my favorite poems here. Was surprised I hadn't commented on it. Hearth, heart, home. I always enjoy the repetition in this one. In new light, voices vibrate, a clock ticks... I like those rhythms.
ReplyDeleteReads like a song John.
ReplyDeleteI feel the love that radiates warmth up and down staircases and across rooms. Ice, north or south, will always melt here.
ReplyDeleteI miss the hearth of my home as a child. Cold hands, warm fire the smell... it all came flooding back. Thank you
ReplyDeleteI just found this and enjoyed the read. Thank you
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I love the first 'verse', and the 'chorus' is haunting (in a good way) and very well worded. The second 'verse' seems a little shorter, faster paced, and with less visuals. I wasn't expecting that. Lovely poem overall. Keep up the awesome work! :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful. The quiet of an early morning and then the lovely son approaching.
ReplyDeleteThis particularly resonates with me today for several reasons... a beautiful piece! - P.D. Gourlais
ReplyDeleteCould I publish this on my website?
ReplyDeleteLove! "Ice, hard as stone
ReplyDelete- standing – in the North –
bring it South, to home,
the hearth, the heart, the home."
Love the repetition and alliteration. And of course I like the home, heart, and hearth---a very heart warming read---despite the cold outside.
ReplyDeleteYour poem gives me warmth on this cold winter night here in Sydney.
ReplyDeleteGood to read about ice and stone. Here in the northwest it's wet, dark and soft, and a little too warm. Happy holidays. Visiting from Twitter.
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