Monday 8 June 2009

Alchemy


I want you to imagine a creature
after midnight walking from a winter sea,
lumbering forward, every feature
intent on reaching out for you and me.

He stands, a shadow, looking at his feet
stamping in a dawn on this cold
shore an alien, stubborn and eager to play.

Beware. He needs our heat
so shall we spark a match and aim for gold?
But he could test our metal - make your day.

7 comments:

  1. Alchemy, I like it, it's alluring, even a touch tempting. I am curious if you are referring to attraction between two people?

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  2. I think of this lumbering creature in a Jungian way, as representative of a part of ourselves, a Self we have neglected & must reclaim & reincorporate into ourselves. He only wants to play. Let's bring him home...that's my take on it anyway. His coming from the sea suggests our primordial origins, the sea suggest a womb of being. & his emergence suggests that he is becoming, evolving. Let's give him a towel to dry off & prepare a hot meal for our forgotten friend

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    1. lets do that.... when he's at home will he stay dissociated? we also have to talk and nurse him or he will leave again on a bick like ET...

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  3. Jim - love your analysis - you captured a feeling completely!! J

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  4. Imagine I did.... I like the idea of a force (the creature) intent on using my heat - (my spirit) to transform me into gold..

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  5. Like a Lovecraftian Golem, this rough beast, its hour come round at last, slouches toward my bed to transform...

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  6. Take a chance, embrace a new adventure or lose the opportunity and remain safe...
    I lie it

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