Monday 31 August 2009

The Real Deal

Any time

I travel faster than a body’s capability

(on a train, a car, a plane)

an inevitable and minimal vibration,

tickle-whizz of

fixation,

stirs my belly to

a tiny pulse of fear, excitement.

 

Sometimes, in the lifting or

plunging,

Andrew squeals

and engines have become

surreal,

alive.

4 comments:

  1. A nice electric pulse, a static flash. Vibration - fixation/squeals - surreal. Uplifting & cheerful. A gentle blast. Movement. Thanks

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  2. The words resonate within me, as it speaks of my daily life.

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  3. oooooow so lovely and alive giving my tummy butterflies like a child to read these lines of verse gorgeous .. always mzbeeeeeeeeeeeeeez :)))

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